Editing Dark Mage/Extra (section)

==Kenkou's Notes==
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This race tends to be confused with the “witches” of Sabbath, but they are not those who were converted into witches at the hand of baphomets and Sabbath, instead these so-called “stray witches” are human women who possessed powerful monster-like desire and awakened as witches on their own. Due to their origins, since they don't belong to the organization called “Sabbath”, they are hedonistic and self-centered compared to the witches of Sabbath, and those guilty of something who are treated as “wicked witches” are actually these dark mages rather than the witches of Sabbath, or something to that effect.<ref name="mgr">[http://www.monstergirlsredux.com/viewtopic.php?f=9&t=1419 Dark Mage]</ref>

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'''TL Note:''' The line "'''as his thoughts become filled with her during sex'''" can be alternatively translated "'''as his thoughts grow dim.'''" However, by conferring with Exet and KC we know the intended meaning is a temporary state brought on by pleasure where his thoughts become focused utterly on her as opposed to anything resembling mindbreak or something similarly debilitating. We wrote the English text with this meaning in mind.

It was later brought to our attention by others that the initial translation of "voluptuousness" was potentially misleading (i.e. the physical changes need not simply be bigger breasts and hips) and so was changed to the more general term "alluring beauty."<ref name="mgr"/>
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